spitikus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Assassin Pt1]

Wow.

I have to tell you that that blew.

Here's what you might want to do before submitting again:
Learn to draw a decent person.
Learn to use motion tween.
Learn to use motion tween or frame-by-frame animation to move the decently drawn person.
Learn to type in English. (This is for the public, it's not an IM to your buddy.)
Learn to sync music correctly so it doesn't start playing again after you press the play button so that it overlaps and gives anyone listening a migraine.
Learn to crop an image well before using it.
Find out about the trace tool in Flash so that any images you crop might just look like they belong in the flash and aren't cut-outs.
Learn how to make a decent storyline.
Reach puberty.

There was nothing there, and it was just a waste of time for the poor 56k people on NG.

(Sorry for the harsh review, but c'mon... you couldn't have possibly thought that was worth submitting. You even said you spent hardly any time on it so we shouldn't expect it to be good, "Second of all not only was this my first movie but I mad it in less than 15 minutes. Third of all I will make flash but better of couse. This movie was only an experiement!" Don't submit experiments, first flashes, and things that you don't spend time on.)

P.S. The guy telling you to go outside and play baseball was implying that you need to get a better hobby, he just wasn't saying it blatantly. (I'm assuming you know what the words 'hobby' and 'blatantly' mean.)

[Catfight]

I personally didn't like it

My own opinion:

There were a few minor nuisances, like when the cat moved smoothly but the water didn't, and some backdrops were considerably better done than others (probably because you used the tracer thing for some) and when the cats were walking toward the camera, it looked as if just their foot of less than the lower half of the legs were moving. The thing built up to this fight with all of the martial arts training or whatever, and then the fight was just a dustball moving around. One of the reviews before this says that it's hard to imagine cats fighting... well if you can make them stand on posts and practice/train for fighting, you shoulda been able to have them actually do something. And for all the build up it ended sort of abruptly, maybe they could have been fighting in the dumpster than realized the fish and then realized that they should be friends and not fight...? Or realize as much as cats can? Another problem was that it was with cats, which just seemed sort of silly.

[bloody shorts]

Okay

All it was was people dying, which was pretty okay -- but they were sticks. Use real people, maybe some better props and background, and if you took the time to make a story along with it it might come out to be real nice. The sounds were good except some were a lot louder than ther others.

Harakirie responds:

not all of them where sticks .

[Flying Pigs are fun 2]

Excellent

It seemed sort of pointless, but the animations were excellent and I can tell you took a really long time on them and the piece entirely. Great job.

[Inflictor Quest 2]

Okay

It was really good for your second flash. As an animation in the community, though, it was just okay. Most of the characters weren't really animated. Most of the motions were just stills that zoomed in or panned about. Their arms, legs, and body didn't actually move. The only thing that moved was the mouths, which looked like they could have been made just a little better considering the frequency you used them. Some of the jokes seemed a little forced, but it was all good. There were also a few parts that seemed sort of slow, like when they were giving out the weapons, maybe you could have just said what each one was when each character first used it?

It was excellent for a second flash and I expect good things from you.

Nice work!

[_FLU!(chapter09)]

pretty cool

well, the story seems interesting enough, and the music in the background adds to the tension and action. the action sequences could be a little more detailed, and considering this was obviously made in Poser, you certainly could do that fairly easily. i would think that you could make some of the animation a little smoother because you did it in poser, but it still looks overall pretty nice.

[Anti-Drug Spoof]

Could use work

I thougth the idea was funny enough. The drawings could be a little smoother, maybe, and maybe the voices could sound less like they're being spoken with the microphone at the lips. But it was pretty good for 2 hours. :p

TheUltimateMe responds:

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